Differences Between Before and After Marriage
There are many differences for women and men
in marital life. While men encounter with a different life such as allocating
time to their wifes, making plans about their money and taking responsibities
for their family, women do their life better which have already had this life.
Men spent time by playing football, going to
watch football match, going to cafe and doing various thing before the
marriage. Women spent time by going shop and shopping, visiting new places,
going hairdresser and cinema with her girl friend. After single life, women and
men realise that they had better spend time with each other wherefore their
life is laminated together.
Unlike women, men spend a lot of money.
Unfortunely, many men are irresponsible about this issue. They don’t generally
have a plan about money for their future. On the contrary, women are always
thrifty about how spend their money. After the marriage, men can change due to
their responsiblity. Because they are not alone anymore so that it is
thought money has an important place for
family life.
There are different responsibilities between
before and after marriage. Before marriage, there are not so many task for men.
Already, many tas kare connected with their mother. Similarly, girls have so
many task. But compared to men, girl’s task have more than. For example, girls
could iron their clothes but didn’t wash clothes. Cause mothers already did
that. After marriage, girls undertake all the duties of her mother. At the same
time, men should help his wife about family task. So men take responsibility
more than before.
Differences
we see in the family life for both men and women are changeable. Women
spend fewer time with her friends like men. Life whether married or not is
difficult. İf you are getting married, you just make your life easier.
responsiblity, İf, tas kare, unfortunely ---> spelling mistakes
YanıtlaSilBecause they are not alone anymore so that it is thought money has an important place for family life. --->?
many task ---> singular-plural (tasks)
Men spent time by playing football, going to watch football match, going to cafe and doing various thing before the marriage. ---> You should use "simple present tense" because you talk about general something.
But compared to men, girl’s task have more than. ---> You should not use "but" at the beginning of the sentence.
didn’t ---> You should not use abbreviation because it is an academic writing.
Men spent time by playing football, going to watch football match, going to cafe and doing various thing before the marriage. ---> before going and doing ı didnt use ''BY'' in case it can be seen unnecessary. Actually right form = Men spent time by playing football, by going to watch football match, by going to cafe and by doing various thing before the marriage. thanks for your beautiful comment dear (:
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