cause&effect 1 second draft

17.4.2014

                                         UNHEALTHY   HABİTS

How many people are aware of having unhealthy habits? No one knows it until their body makes them suffer and no one knows how to quit them and how much they have to suffer from the harm of those habits. As the time goes by, the unhealthy habits cause our lives to get limited and we just ignore it. There are a lot of reasons to quit the unhealthy habits like smoking, overeating, drinking, and sleeping too much.

Firstly, there are a lot of reasons not to smoke. Smoking physically causes lung cancer, vascular occlusion, emphysema, cataract, heart disease, and bronchitis. A cigarette contains a lot of harmful chemicals which dramatically damage people’s health. Smoking causes the death of brain cells, which leads people to inefficiency in learning, mental impairment and early dementia. Smoking affects the smell of people’s breath, clothes, and hair. People may not be aware of how they smell, but people around them realize this disgusting odor. When people consider those points, they become more aware and find a way to quit smoking.

Secondly, there are a lot of reasons not to overeat. Overeating causes people to obesity, heart disease, diabetes, and cancer. Especially overeating fast-food is dangerous for people’s health.  People who overeat start to hate themselves, become regretful for eating and feel stressed. When people become fat, it becomes difficult for them to find suitable clothes. Even if they do not want to eat, they cannot control themselves. When people consider those points, they become more aware and find a way to quit overeating.

Finally, there are a lot of reasons not to oversleep. Oversleeping causes people to diabetes, headaches, depression, heart disease, hormonal imbalance, and obesity. The amount of sleep depends on the age, but people are supposed to sleep 8 hours per day. People who oversleep generally feel depressed because they feel lethargic and regretful after waking up. They want to sleep more although they are totally wide awake. It is not under their control. When people consider those points, they become more aware and find a way to quit oversleeping.

To sum up, we have uncountable unhealthy habits. These are the most well known habits over the world. To me, the first thing people must do is to know their habits and the second thing is to separate which one is harmful to their health. Then they had better get support to overcome our unhealthy habits.

Logical Division Essay-Final Draft

Nazlıhan Öztürk

03.04.2014

The Development of Phones

Since the first human was created, the communication is a really important thing. People have always tried to find a way to communicate with others. Shouting, using smoke, drawing pictures toward walls were some systems that were used at old ages. However, the invention of mobile phones was the most important thing to help people communicate with other. To study the development of mobile phones, we need to divide it into 3 parts. Therefore, the development of mobile phone is studied into 3 parts: the first phones, the phones that are used at homes and jobs, the mobile phones.

First, it is important to study the first phones to understand the value of phones. The first phone that was invented by Graham Bell was not enough for people to communicate. People could hear their voices with them, but there was some buzz that affected people to hear their voices effectively. Furthermore, the phone system was not built in an effective way, so people could only call others when they were at stations and the ones that were called also needed to be at stations. However, the phone system that helped people to hear others voice was better than the other communication techniques.

Second, it is important to study the phones that are used at homes and jobs to understand the value of phones. After some years, people were able to develop the phone system and they started to communicate with others not only at the stations but also at homes and works. This was a great development for people because they were able to communicate with others when they were at work. People were able to share the information they gathered at work. Moreover, when something serious happened at work, people were able to call an ambulance or a taxi to take them to a hospital.

Finally, it is important to study to understand the value of phones. After some years, the inventors were able to invent the mobile phone, which created a huge effect on people. After the invention of mobile phones, people started to communicate with others from anywhere.  Not only do people communicate with others from anywhere, but they can connect to the Internet, take photos, play games, and listen something on the radio. A person that lived in the 1800s could not think the value of phones that we get benefit from today.

To sum up, the value of phones can be studied by observing the first phones, the phones that are used at home and work, and the mobile phones. By observing those, we could understand the things we use and do not think about their value. After we understand their value, we can contribute the development of technologic devices.

Division Essay

Nazlıhan Öztürk

03.04.2014

The Development of Phones

Since the first human was created, the communication is a really important thing. People have always tried to find a way to communicate with others. Shouting, using smoke, drawing pictures toward walls were some systems that were used at old ages. However, the invention of mobile phones was the most important thing to help people communicate with other. To study the development of mobile phones, we need to divide it into 3 parts. Therefore, the development of mobile phone is studied into 3 parts: the first phones, the phones that are used at homes and jobs, the mobile phones.

First, it is important to study the first phones to understand the value of phones. The first phone that was invented by Graham Bell was not enough for people to communicate. People could hear their voices with them, but there was some buzz that affected people to hear their voices effectively. Furthermore, the phone system was not built in an effective way, so people could only call others when they were at stations and the ones that were called also needed to be at stations. However, the phone system that helped people to hear others voice was better than the other communication techniques.

Second, it is important to study the phones that are used at homes and jobs to understand the value of phones. After some years, people were able to develop the phone system and they started to communicate with others not only at the stations but also at homes and works. This was a great development for people because they were able to communicate with others when they were at work. People were able to share the information they gathered at work. Moreover, when something serious happened at work, people were able to call an ambulance or a taxi to take them to a hospital.

Finally, it is important to study to understand the value of phones. After some years, the inventors were able to invent the mobile phone, which created a huge effect on people. After the invention of mobile phones, people started to communicate with others from anywhere.  Not only do people communicate with others from anywhere, but they can connect to the Internet, take photos, play games, and listen something on the radio. A person that lived in the 1800s could not think the value of phones that we get benefit from today.

To sum up, the value of phones can be studied by observing the first phones, the phones that are used at home and work, and the mobile phones. By observing those, we could understand the things we use and do not think about their value. After we understand their value, we can contribute the development of technologic devices.

Comparison / Contrast Essay

                  Differences Between Before and After Marriage

  There are many differences for women and men in marital life. While men encounter with a different life such as allocating time to their wifes, making plans about their money and taking responsibities for their family, women do their life better which have already had this life.

  Men spent time by playing football, going to watch football match, going to cafe and doing various thing before the marriage. Women spent time by going shop and shopping, visiting new places, going hairdresser and cinema with her girl friend. After single life, women and men realise that they had better spend time with each other wherefore their life is laminated together.

  Unlike women, men spend a lot of money. Unfortunely, many men are irresponsible about this issue. They don’t generally have a plan about money for their future. On the contrary, women are always thrifty about how spend their money. After the marriage, men can change due to their responsiblity. Because they are not alone anymore so that it is thought  money has an important place for family life.

  There are different responsibilities between before and after marriage. Before marriage, there are not so many task for men. Already, many tas kare connected with their mother. Similarly, girls have so many task. But compared to men, girl’s task have more than. For example, girls could iron their clothes but didn’t wash clothes. Cause mothers already did that. After marriage, girls undertake all the duties of her mother. At the same time, men should help his wife about family task. So men take responsibility more than before.

  Differences  we see in the family life for both men and women are changeable. Women spend fewer time with her friends like men. Life whether married or not is difficult. İf you are getting married, you just make your life easier.

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             Differences Between Before and After Marriage

There are many differences for women and men in marital life. While men encounter with a different life such as allocating time to their wifes, making plans about their money and taking responsibities for their family, women do their life better which have already had this life.

1.      How do they spend time before marriage and after marriage?

a.      Before marriage, both spent time their firend.

b.      After marriage, both should allow time each other.

2.      How do they make a plan for their money?

a.      Before marriage, unlike women, men didn’t have a plan.

b.      After marriage, both should spend money for their life.

3.      How do they have the responsibility?

a.      Before marriage, there are not mant task for men.

b.      After marriage, both had better take responsibilty to help each other.